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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases  Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:00 am |
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I've missed you guys! Been struggling with severe writer's block. Thought I was done. But I'm not ready to give up yet I don't think  . It's been a pleasure reading you and all the other talentd writers here. As usual you and DD were on point. Yall's stuff just floats like a bunch of happy helium balloons. Talented, talented sistas!!!!!! CW, I was feeling yours too and that text cracked me up. Loved it!
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 2:58 pm |
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MORE RANDOM POETIC PHRASES! GET YOUR RANDOM POETIC PHRASES HERE!!!!
-A room of silver
-deep dark gold
-the kiss of emerald
*Diva sits in the corner Indian style and patiently awaits for her friends to repsond to her smoke signals*
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 3:17 pm |
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deep dark gold
a room of silver
the kiss of emerald
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Diva bathed in the sun becoming
the deep dark gold of honey
the creeping velvet grass beneath her enveloped her like the
kiss of emerald from a thousand lips
She felt like Heaven as the breeze caressed her frame and she dreamed of being
in a room of silver clouds...
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 9:21 pm |
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Magical Kingdom She luxuriated in the deep, dark gold hue of his skin Loving him as purely as a room of silver shines in the moonlight And keeping true to the kiss of emerald fantasy that dominated their world, She worshiped him like a fairy would and elf king Okay Louise what up with all these jewerly phrases???? Thank God Memph doles out the word choices and not you.  And by the way Diggin' the hell outta your take on those there phrases!!!!
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:48 pm |
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Well PF you ain't too rusty yo damn self there girlie!!!! If you can work with my little whack phrases, I know you got skills!!!!! I'll try a little harder with the next phrases...How are these?
"ashes of youth"
"miraculous feathers"
"determined dawn"
Now deal wit it Sponge Bob "smarty" pants!!
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:55 pm |
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"ashes of youth"
"miraculous feathers"
"determined dawn"
Ashes of youth scattered by a thin whisper of wind
revealed miraculous feathers
carrying her toward a determined dawn....
(PF, I know you can do better than that....)
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:41 pm |
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Escaping Death
She gathered the ashes of youth lost to age
Sprinkled them around her to rejuvenate her spirit
Spreading arms adorned with miraculous feathers
And ascended toward a determined dawn
Leaving behind uncertainty
Escaping faith
To reside forever in the bosom of innocence
Well Louise thank you for stepping up and grabbing the bull by the horns and into memph's role of administrator. No better person to do it than you!!!!!!!!! THANKS!!
Dug your words lady. Keep doing what cha do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 8:03 am |
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I knew you'd rock it! You go gurrrl!!!! Yeah Ima administrate my ass off til somebody shows the hell up!!!
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 4:33 am |
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DreadedDiva wrote: MORE RANDOM POETIC PHRASES! GET YOUR RANDOM POETIC PHRASES HERE!!!!
-A room of silver
-deep dark gold
-the kiss of emerald
*Diva sits in the corner Indian style and patiently awaits for her friends to repsond to her smoke signals* Thanks DD for jump-starting this topic. I'll see if I can stir up others to join you and PF.
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 2:04 pm |
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mempheus wrote: DreadedDiva wrote: MORE RANDOM POETIC PHRASES! GET YOUR RANDOM POETIC PHRASES HERE!!!!
-A room of silver
-deep dark gold
-the kiss of emerald
*Diva sits in the corner Indian style and patiently awaits for her friends to repsond to her smoke signals* Thanks DD for jump-starting this topic. I'll see if I can stir up others to join you and PF. ***Mems! I'm so glad to see you!!! Me and PF's fingers were growing fatigued, but we are not ever going to give up on finding our missing kin! Welcome home!!!!
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:14 am |
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Moon peeked below, his illicit gaze rapt
Sista' Earth lay bathed, in a room of silver
Her breaths betrayed, keening, riding
Cloaked in movement; silent, powerful, liquid
Birthing birth, living life, creating creation
Shallow hills, massive mounds
Deep dark gold define her silhouette
Gazing back, she holds him prisoner
His shackles, the kiss of emerald.
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:38 am |
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charm wrote: Moon peeked below, his illicit gaze rapt
Sista' Earth lay bathed, in a room of silver
Her breaths betrayed, keening, riding
Cloaked in movement; silent, powerful, liquid
Birthing birth, living life, creating creation
Shallow hills, massive mounds
Deep dark gold define her silhouette
Gazing back, she holds him prisoner
His shackles, the kiss of emerald. Very beautiful, Charm. You've been gone awhile but this piece refreshes the memories of your talented writing.
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 10:45 pm |
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Charm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You still got it gurl!!!
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 8:01 pm |
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Beautiful!!!
Beautiful!!!!
Beeeeeeeeeeeeauuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful!!!
Charm I just love it!!!!!!!!!
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Post subject: Re: Random Poetic Phrases Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:21 am |
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one kind
behold the pleasantness
power unmatched
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